You need some pointers..
I can tell your new to flash. You need to spend more time on your objects, and the sound quality was horrible. You really need to buy a new mic or something because, wow that was horrible. As for plot...there was none, it was just a guy. It was literally 1 second of animation man, I've seen newbs start out and they are better than this. You need to step it up, or your just wasting your time animating because you have no life.